Song I've Written!!!

Mistake
Genre: Rock
Writer: NaturallyWonderful

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I know I've made foolish choices in the past, but I'm not even going to contemplate on what you did. You broke my heart, took the pieces and threw them out, and now I feel so empty, so insecure, and I don't think you love me anymore. It just feels so wrong, so complicated, I even used to think we were going strong, but I've realized you don't care about me anymore, and that's what tore me apart!

Chorus: I made a mistake and now it's too late to make things any better. And it's no secret, our reality's not to great. I try to let you go, 'cause I don't even need you anymore, but I still find it hard to move on when you're gone.

I rip up these memories of you and me, I throw away your photo, baby, it's over. I don't care if you beg, yes I remember the things you said, but nothing will make up for the tears I have shed.

(Repeat Chorus)

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This is the chorus of the song my BFF and I wrote. The song isn't done yet. Sorry.



We've only got the chorus done. Sorry, but here it is:

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Unnamed Genre: Rock/Pop

Why did everything have to change? No our lives are rearranged. It's caused us great pain, it drives us insane. We now always fight, and it keeps us up at night. At the beginning it was fun, now we wish it was done.

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