Okay so i wrote this poem. (written by me, Cybunny_luver229. NO stealing or putting in your blog.)
you breathe in deep, then exhale, get out of bed, to check your mail, you turn around, to take a seat, and look straight down, right at your feet, you turn to see, the window open, you look out, with all words unspoken, a thought has now, come cross your mind, you'll jump out there, a body to find, you look and see, the sun now setting, your life has been, truly regretting.
All of you people who say that you don't get it can't even read. I mean, kind of a scary poem.... not for my cheery soul but she has truly a way with words!^.^
117 years, 3 months & 16 days ago 12th Apr 2009 13:19
10/10 its pretty cool
117 years, 4 months & 22 days ago 6th Mar 2009 13:34
Awsome! It's easy to read, I wasn't confused, and all together loved it! Yayz for you!
117 years, 9 months & 9 days ago 18th Oct 2008 19:13
really odd, i don't have a clue what it's about,
117 years, 10 months & 5 days ago 22nd Sep 2008 20:06
wow.my kind of poem.
117 years, 11 months & 28 days ago 30th Jul 2008 21:13
3/10 Doesn't quite put the message across.
117 years, 11 months & 29 days ago 29th Jul 2008 14:50
You're Good. I Mean, You're A Child And Rhyming Isn't All To Poetry. Edgar Allen Poe Is A Famous Poet And "The Raven" Is Defiantly His Best Work. Good Work Hun, Keep It Up.
117 years, 11 months & 29 days ago 29th Jul 2008 12:00
it's pretty good. Nice rhymes and a good metre. 9/10
118 years & 2 days ago 26th Jul 2008 15:52
I don't get it. I have written better.
118 years & 3 days ago 25th Jul 2008 17:03
wow....did u really make that up thats good it reminds me of this poem called "The Raven" by Edgar Allen Poe its very good you should read it sometime!!!