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Zelda
Okay so i wrote this poem. (written by me, Cybunny_luver229. NO stealing or putting in your blog.)

you breathe in deep, then exhale,
get out of bed, to check your mail,
you turn around, to take a seat,
and look straight down, right at your feet,
you turn to see, the window open,
you look out, with all words unspoken,
a thought has now, come cross your mind,
you'll jump out there, a body to find,
you look and see, the sun now setting,
your life has been, truly regretting.
Zelda34
Zelda21 Jul 200812comments
Comments (12)
  • lilygardens 0 lilygardensPowerful =D
  • Zelda 34 Zeldahaha =]
  • girlygirl2800 0 girlygirl2800wow....did u really make that up thats good it reminds me of this poem called "The Raven" by Edgar Allen Poe its very good you should read it sometime!!!
  • 0 Caitlin11coolioI don't get it. I have written better.
  • Ahti 0 Ahtiit's pretty good. Nice rhymes and a good metre. 9/10
  • pandalamionwcat 0 pandalamionwcatYou're Good. I Mean, You're A Child And Rhyming Isn't All To Poetry. Edgar Allen Poe Is A Famous Poet And "The Raven" Is Defiantly His Best Work. Good Work Hun, Keep It Up.
  • chezzybab 0 chezzybab3/10 Doesn't quite put the message across.
  • 0 billkaulitzfreakwow.my kind of poem.
  • bubbles250 0 bubbles250really odd, i don't have a clue what it's about,
  • 0 danielleysmellyAwsome! It's easy to read, I wasn't confused, and all together loved it! Yayz for you!
  • Euphoria 69 Euphoria10/10 its pretty cool
  • BeforeAndAfter 0 BeforeAndAfterAll of you people who say that you don't get it can't even read. I mean, kind of a scary poem.... not for my cheery soul but she has truly a way with words!^.^
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