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Chapter one
It was a thundery, rainy, cloudy morning and yet I still had to go to my boring school, one of the minuses being a typical 17 year old living in a boring town in a boring universe and having a boring family.
I quickly pulled my baby blue dressing gown on and amenity forgot that it went all the way down to my pink toe nails and nearly sprinted towards the shower before my fingers broke off with frost bite.
My Mum was up 5 minutes after I had got out of my lovely boiling shower and went to turn the heaters on before she had a huge lecture about turning the heaters on before she got up. Well my Mums got cancer so I guess it is important to turn them on in the morning.
???Angel, I???m going to the hospital to get my check up, you can drive to school can???t you??? My short, blonde haired mother called to me as I tried to stuff all my toast into my mouth.
???Um??? I swallowed my breakfast and then continued ???Yeah I drive to school everyday??? But she didn???t hear my response as she walked out the door and drove off to the hospital.
???Don???t worry??? I said to myself while grabbing the keys for my black sports car and locking the big wooden door behind me.
Outside of my double storied house there were huge no humorous puddles that looked like pools compeered to the ones in Hawaii. I quickly ran or more like sprinted to my shiny brand new ford and jumped in before I got drowned by the water trickling down my face.
It took about 5 minutes to get to my boring high school that I swear people could die of boredom.
I sprinted inside the brick school, and then ran down the long wet hall and into the small hot atmosphere of my history class. I walked with my head down and dropped my bag onto the wooden desk. I sat down very slowly knowing that it was April fools and anyone could do anything.
???Righty-o??? Far out, history had started already ???Today, were going to learn about the?????? He had froze in the middle of his sentence, like he was waiting for someone to answer, but none did, the only thing that I remember was that there was a defining bang.
I think I woke or opened my eyes 1 hour later and I think I saw that the whole school and houses from all the streets around my now not so much school where blown up , I tried to take my mind back to the beginning of history, I couldn???t remember much but the thing is, I???m stuck here??? Wait what was that.
???Hello, anyone there, anyone??? The mans voice stopped for a second ???Anyone alive, Call out if you can here me??? I tried to speak but nothing came out. I instantly though that I was dead, I couldn???t speak and for a short space of time I couldn???t breath the air inside of me was trying to escape my lungs and leave me underneath all of the rubble, wood and broken bricks, where I though that it would be my resting place. Forever. Forever was a word that came through my mind frequently because of all the things that I though would have. Would I stay here forever, would my breath stay away forever, would it take the man forever to find me and would this pain last forever?
Chapter 2

It was a bright light and in every movie it says not to go to the bright light but the further I when towards the light the better I felt, but I opened my eyes, I think, and the pain came crawling up my body again and hit me hard in to my chest, like someone was standing on me, I tried to look up and just managed to, as the man looked down at me, he had came back, maybe he had found someone from my class, but he called something out and I jumped at this.
???No ones here, there all dead??? But he looked again, and saw me breathing in sharply and quickly corrected himself ???Wait no, I found someone and there breathing, she looks like she???s in pain??? I was about to shout out but I guessed I past out. It felt good, lying here in a more comfortable position, lying here in what felt like a coffin. I knew I was dead, because death felt really good and that was where the pain ended.
I open my eyes for the last time and saw tones of people around me, you know that bright light from before, yeah its back but in front of my eyes, I tried to look up, but didn???t manage as I felt really dozy and passed out again.
I mooned and rolled over; I felt the warmth that I had not felt for what seemed ages, I felt the air back in my lungs and I felt safe.
???Angel??? heaven sounded like my mum, like she was trying to awaken me from my pleasant sleep, like??? Shoot she sound so worried, I still don???t know what had happened, as I slowly opened my eyes and saw the blonde hair of my mum falling over her worried face and tearful eyes.
I tried to sit up, but got pushed back down by a really hot guy; wait no hot would be an understatement.
???Hello and welcome to Seattle hospital, how do you feel??? the hottie asked me. But I didn???t really answer him as I was trying to get my head around what had happened and I think that it showed on my face.
???You where a or the only survivor, of what we believe, an act of terrorism??? I was about to use all my energy to scream at him but he started to talk again.
???Well I mean no one in the houses got hurt but your school and everything in it was well broken and dead, apart from you??? I was trying to speak AGAIN, but then my mum interrupted me.
???Hey, Angel, you had me so worried I though you were dead??? she started to cry in the middle of her sentence, the hottie talked again.
???Hey we don???t expect you to speak to us for a while???
I mooned and talk ???You just didn???t let me?????? I stopped and felt a really sharp pain in my leg and grabbed it and breathed in like I was in mediation. A doctor in his white coat walked in slowly.
???Hey, are you in pain??? he asked not so worried.
I heard someone else scream and I knew it was my mum and she screamed at her.
???Oh my god??? I basically screamed as my loving mother hit the floor hard and had a heart attack.
He breath in deeply and sharply and then called a nurse too get a stretcher that was broken and worn out.
I fell asleep at 3am that night knot knowing what had happened to my Mother.

It was about 7 o-clocks in the morning and I could tell as the television from the person next to me was put up so loud that the walls and everything in my room were shaking. They or it eventually Switched off the T.V after a doctor in there white coat walked past my room and probably went into it???s room.
???Were so sorry??? I burst into tears knowing that my mum had past away ???Is there any relative that can look after you or that can come down here to help with the plans of a funeral??? He asked not look sorry at all.
???No mum was an only child and frank isn???t around any more and all of my grandparents died of old age??? I said trying not to cry any more but the tears keep rolling down my pale face and onto my long dyed black hair.
???Well then you???re going to have to go into adoption??? I didn???t answer as I was still crying and didn???t want to talk to anyone. I didn???t talk to anyone and suffered in pain as my mother probably did in her last minutes on earth.
Chapter 3
It was took 6 weeks for my several injuries to heal and 6 weeks for me to be bored to death in the old cottage that held 20 children that were a
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