This is a mono-tetra style poem that I wrote during a creative writing lesson. Tell me what you think:

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You were born weighing four pounds three,
crying out loud, crying for me,
you don't know who you want to be,
hush now baby, hush now baby,

You don't know what tomorrow brings,
you've not long left, the angel sings,
onto life you no longer cling,
now spread your wings, now spread your wings,

With your halo away you fly,
higher and higher in the sky,
as you left I started to cry,
this is goodbye, this is goodbye.
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-Posy

Hey, welcome to a little bit about me!
I joined marapets on February 18, 2009, 12:10 pm, and still going strong!
-I live in the UK, so there aren't that many members on whenever I'm on, but there's always 300 or so on.
-I'm studying art and english, and am an aspiring author and photographer.
-I'm always in a mood to chat, so don't be afraid to MM me(I don't bite, honestly).
-My dream pet is a toy sindi, which I am currently saving up for. Any donations are appreciated, but not necessary.
-If you ever need help, MM me-I'll be glad to help out!

If you have any questions, feel welcome to ask me either below or through MM