A/N: I really want to know your opinions for this first chapter... I have written seven chapters for this so far...but here's the first chapter of my first novel "Missing Piece" (I have a lot of novels but this was my first)
Summary: Lorelei and Matt lived an orphaned life after their unknown parents left them when they were still so young, but even though their condition was like that, they still lived a happy life together. But when things get hectic, would things be still normal as their happy days?
Missing Piece
???A promise makes two vows??????
~ First Chapter ~
It was a stormy night when Lorelei???s parents brought them to the orphanage. Lorelei was still a baby back then and Matt, her brother, was not older than eight years old. Their parents knocked at the front door???
???Hello? Is anyone there that could help us???? asked their mom. Their dad banged the door stronger letting the crows fly away from their nest. Finally, the door creaked open and their stood a lady with proper posture but has odiously, nasty manners.
???What do you want at the middle of the night!???? asked the lady with her French accent. ???We would like you to take our children and keep them safe?????? pleaded their mom. The lady looked at them and said, ???Come in quickly and we???ll discuss this further inside.??? They followed her leading them to the living room of the orphanage.
The lady sat at her chair in front of her working desk. She put on her glasses and started talking. ???Explain your reasons why you want to leave them here and why you have to do this kind of matter in the middle of the night!??? Both their parents flinched as they looked at each other.
Their dad replied, ???Uh, could we discuss somewhere private? Where our children would not hear a thing???? The lady nodded and asked her assistant to bring the children upstairs. ???Very well then, Maria!???
???Yes, Ma???am???? she asked. ???Bring those two children upstairs!??? said the lady. ???Come along now, children?????? said Maria as she took them, but Matt struggled to break loose. Their mom went near Matt and hugged him. ???It???s ok, Matt, you could go with her??????
???But, mom, I don???t want to leave you!??? whined Matt letting his tears flow freely down his face. Their mom wept his tears and said, ???Matt, listen to me. You have to go with her, because you and your sister will be sa
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I mean, I'm almost always inspired, but when I opened a blank paper and started writing, my head full of ideas goes blank... and poof! All the ideas were all thrown out.
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