Anyone willing to give feedback on writing?

I would really appreciate some. It's not the most exciting of chapters(it's not too long) but I need to know how the characters are coming across because I'm feeling like they are just grating haha

The story is set in 17th century London. It will eventually turn into a story about my mc becoming a highwayman, but this is her beginning.

https://yarny.me/share/v4cbbc

Please MM with your response, let me know how each of the characters come off and your impressions.

Thanks