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kittycat9738
I am still working on this song..I don't know why I wrote, I just felt inspired. Please give advice or support! It's appreciated! Okay So here's the song so far:


It???s like you???re trying to breath
But there???s not oxygen
It???s like you???re trying to walk away
But they keep pulling you in
It???s like you???re trying to run
But they catch up in one stride
Sometimes you just want to
Find a corner and hide.
But when you look ???em straight in the eye
You see who they are really, inside
And now I wonder why
You said good-bye
Your fake friendship,
Tore me in two
Now my cold heart,
Is trying to live without you..
Chorus;
Sometimes you have to take risks
You gotta try,
Sometimes you gotta,
Lift your wings and fly.
Just close your eyes
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kittycat973826 Aug 20126comments
Comments (6)
  • kittycat9738 0 kittycat9738That's all I have so far, I still need ideas and such. Comment if you have any ideas, support, or advice (:
  • Kasie666 24 Kasie666it is not bad, your rhyming numbers is off ( no real pattern) and you sorta lost me with the friendship stuff, does not really seem to fit well. perhaps stick with the inner demons theme
  • Shadow 75 ShadowMy favourite part is the chorus
  • bettens 22 bettensIt's a really nice song. Great lyrics!
  • MizzMara03 0 MizzMara03nice lyrics ❤️ good job
  • kittycat9738 0 kittycat9738Aw Thanks you guys!
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