I have a few things, tell me if their any good(:

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The Pain-

You only see the scars,
My thoughts trapped by bars,
You only know my action,
I am not an attraction...

Some say I???m quite a freak,
I myself, say I???m bleak,
I don???t know what to say!
But if i did, I'm sure,
I could take your breath away.

It???s not about the blood,
It???s about the pain,
You can hurt me,
I can hurt me,
But one feels like acid rain...

So if i hurt me first,
Maybe the thirst,
Will be quenched like the pain,
???Cus I'm tired of the acid rain.
The acid rain....

Save my body,
From the acid rain,
Save my thoughts,
For there is nothing more to gain!

I???m not a pawn,
My thoughts at dawn,
I know what to say,
But their taking my own breath away???

I???m gonna soak up the acid rain,
I???m gonna try to stay sane,
So leave me here to die,
There???s no more need to pry???

???Cus the way I feel,
The way I am,
It???s no longer just my actions,
But considered a reaction,


From the acid rain,
Breaking down my brain.
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