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johnnybgoode
  1. just rambling i guess
    26th Apr 2015 07:41
    9 years, 1 month & 29 days ago
  2. an endless tale
    22nd Oct 2014 07:17
    9 years & 8 months ago
  3. i've now decided
    21st Jul 2014 05:14
    9 years, 11 months & 4 days ago
  4. acorns
    4th Jul 2014 05:28
    9 years, 11 months & 21 days ago
  5. inanimate people
    14th Nov 2011 18:32
    12 years, 7 months & 7 days ago
  6. inanimate people / contours
    30th Oct 2011 18:29
    12 years, 7 months & 22 days ago
  7. just yesterday
    24th Oct 2011 20:56
    12 years, 7 months & 28 days ago
  8. together they know
    27th Sep 2011 17:08
    12 years, 8 months & 24 days ago
  9. animal rescue
    8th Sep 2011 19:04
    12 years, 9 months & 15 days ago
  10. affluence
    8th Sep 2011 18:06
    12 years, 9 months & 15 days ago
discovery
15 years, 1 month & 9 days ago
15th May 2009 14:50

darkness is falling
the bleakness calling out to me
as the trees bend down their heads to sleep
leafless grey arms reaching for peace
embracing my soul with tired fingers
i walk alone along their sheltered path
my heart echoing the distant sound of thunder
the distant sound of pain
where am i going i ask?

as the first raindrop falls to my cheek
the trees awaken and begin to nod their heads
the crack of thunder
and then silence as my footsteps cease
i stand alone and raise my face to the rain
comforted by nature and full of humility
warmth surrounds me and
i discover i have found where i was going

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copyright of this poem has been registered to myself so please do not copy and paste onto random blogs - many thanks - johnny

fluffynkacy
beautiful
112 years, 7 months & 13 days ago 8th Nov 2011 22:01
 
as the trees bend down their heads to sleep
~
As the trees bow their heads, to sleep
?

leafless grey arms reaching for peace
~
Reach instead of reaching?


embracing my soul with tired fingers
~
Embrace?


It's a lovely poem :3
Beautiful, really.
You are very talented!
112 years, 8 months & 24 days ago 27th Sep 2011 18:38
 
Wow, i get bored when i write poems, so i usually turn them into jokes
113 years, 11 months & 4 days ago 20th Jul 2010 15:22
 
wow.. you never cease to amaze me johnny..
113 years, 11 months & 25 days ago 29th Jun 2010 14:15
 
This and your other poem are great!!!
114 years, 4 months & 10 days ago 11th Feb 2010 21:55
 
Wow

~Mimi~
114 years, 7 months & 22 days ago 31st Oct 2009 03:49
 
god your grate ^_^
114 years, 9 months & 23 days ago 31st Aug 2009 14:17
 
Great Poem!
I Love To Write Poems Myself.
Keep Up The Good Work Johnny

~Ash~
115 years & 21 days ago 2nd Jun 2009 14:32
 
very nice, it doesn't always flow that well but it's something you need to learn just by writing and writing and writing

don't forget to capitalize I though
115 years, 1 month & 3 days ago 21st May 2009 23:16
 
  1. just rambling i guess
    26th Apr 2015 07:41
    9 years, 1 month & 29 days ago
  2. an endless tale
    22nd Oct 2014 07:17
    9 years & 8 months ago
  3. i've now decided
    21st Jul 2014 05:14
    9 years, 11 months & 4 days ago
  4. acorns
    4th Jul 2014 05:28
    9 years, 11 months & 21 days ago
  5. inanimate people
    14th Nov 2011 18:32
    12 years, 7 months & 7 days ago
  6. inanimate people / contours
    30th Oct 2011 18:29
    12 years, 7 months & 22 days ago
  7. just yesterday
    24th Oct 2011 20:56
    12 years, 7 months & 28 days ago
  8. together they know
    27th Sep 2011 17:08
    12 years, 8 months & 24 days ago
  9. animal rescue
    8th Sep 2011 19:04
    12 years, 9 months & 15 days ago
  10. affluence
    8th Sep 2011 18:06
    12 years, 9 months & 15 days ago