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addiebell2
This is a first draft so its not perfect so GET OVER IT!!!

Where was I ? All i could feel is the cool floor underneath me, no it was a table because my arm just fell off the side. All a could remeber was pain in my chest. Ow, it hurt to breath.
Suddenly I remembered misson green. I had been caught, my cover was blown. I remebered being cornered by them all sides. One pointed a gun at me, i saw the glint of metal has he drew it out. He aimed so quickly I had no time to act. He fired with deadly aim. It had Hit me in the heart, it had been leatal. I new it had happen i had heard the crack as it hit me, the pain as the leathal bullet hit bone. How was I alive? This didnt make since. Then I knew they had saved me, I didnt know how or why but they did. What did they want my secrets, my knowleage? How much more whould i suffer ?


Thank you for reading please comment maybe i wright more
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addiebell228 Mar 20094comments
Comments (4)
  • nonoraven 27 nonoravenThis is very interesting, will there be more?
  • 0 moonprincess111I EDITED IT, NICE THOUGH. Where was I ? All i could feel is the cool floor underneath me, no it was a table, because my cold, pale arm just fell off the thick metal corner. All a could remeber was pain shooting through my spine and ribs. Ow, it was painful to even inhale. Suddenly I remembered mission green. I had been caught, my cover was blown. I remebered being cornered by them, all sides. One pointed a pistol at me, i saw the glint of silver and bronze metal has he drew it out. He aimed so quickly I had no time to act. He fired with a lethal, and paralell aim. It had Hit me in the left of my third rib, it had been extreamly leathal indeed. I new it had happened, I had heard the crack as it hit me, the pain as the cold bullet hit bone. How was I alive? This didnt make sense. Then I knew they had saved me, I didnt know how, or why, but they did. What did they want? My serets, my knowledge? How much more whould i suffer?
  • RedRose16 0 RedRose16Interesting! It would be better if you revised it, editing the grammar/spelling mistakes.
  • iluvmymommy222 0 iluvmymommy222spooky, interesting. your a good writer
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