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susziegrl35
This is a story that I just started writing and I want to thank Smiles016 for helping me pick out a title!

"I never thought it would happen I told my freind Caitlynn.What is it Claire?You will never believe it!WHAT!Bryan McKlousky asked me out on date Friday!No way Caitlynn shrieked!Where to?La Gquermo!That guy must be rich!Its $15 for drinks!I know I asked him if I needed to bring any money but he said he would pay for every penny!"You are sooo lucky!"
susziegrl350
susziegrl351 Dec 20083comments
Comments (3)
  • Tarot 75 TarotYou need to start a new paragraph every time someone new talks. Use "'s" on all dialect.
  • BasketB13 0 BasketB13Well you could possibly write an actual story if you wrote correctly. Use correct punctuation also.
  • susziegrl35 0 susziegrl35please dont make suggestions on my writing I am just doing this to get it wrote then I will have somebody do the gramar stuff for me cuz I hate doing that grammar stuff!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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