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Zelda
Another poem written by ME, cybunny_luver229, DONT steal or put in your blog.
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The love they share, it is so deep,
its strong enough to make you weep.

On one cold October day,
they now heard the doctor say,
he has cancer in his heart,
you will both soon be apart.

the girl she shed a tear,
the boy said baby do not fear,
we'll find a way to make it through,
if not we'll do all we can do.

when im there, he whispered, up above,
you'll still have all of my love,
she wiped her tears and finally said,
boy, i'll love you, even dead.
Zelda34
Zelda26 Jul 200813comments
Comments (13)
  • hope246 0 hope246thats beautiful, good job on it, i read the first of it and had 2 read all of it it was soooooo good.
  • classicalgirl13 0 classicalgirl13that is good, and sad.. my grama died of cancer a month ago.. 65 years old.. 12/25/1942-6/25/08...
  • Lovrina 0 LovrinaAwwww dats so sweet 8/10
  • lemonlicker333 0 lemonlicker333I'm not trying to be funny, or make fun of it, but that was deeeeeeeeeeeep.
  • lemonlicker333 0 lemonlicker333The good kind of deep, though.
  • ComeOnDaddi 0 ComeOnDaddiThat was really...nice. (: Like one of those touching e-mails that go around. Chain mails..are they called? But this is in a good way. ❤️
  • SincerelySara 29 SincerelySaraCUTE
  • Kionna 0 KionnaLove it!!!!
  • Kirosaki 0 KirosakiI think i'm crying!
  • 0 danielleysmellyWow! That was problem one of the best poems I've read todya! Moving, very moving. Keep up the good writing!
  • socialb 0 socialbWoweee! thats sad! But good.... WELL peace out! PS:I like pie!!!!!!
  • BeforeAndAfter 0 BeforeAndAfterWhat a good poet. I could not even find a word to rhyme with please and put it into a peom about cheese. Also.... Does that poem happen to be.... i don't know..... about you and your dad?
  • Kikyo12345 0 Kikyo12345Nice Poem, could you rate mine on my blog??
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