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shakira202
  1. MY MARAPET FRIENDS
    9th Sep 2008 19:10
    16 years, 10 months & 17 days ago
  2. Whats Love?
    29th Aug 2008 23:43
    16 years, 10 months & 27 days ago
  3. POEMS I WROTE
    11th Jul 2008 12:18
    17 years & 16 days ago
  4. Apart
    10th Jul 2008 00:41
    17 years & 17 days ago
Apart
17 years & 17 days ago
10th Jul 2008 00:41

This is a poem i wrote DON'T STEAL IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Apart




As I lay here in cold
My future untold
Never to see the light
Or whatever else is bright
I wish you were within my reach
Then we would lay together forever on the beach
As I lay here in cold
My future untold
With love in my heart
I will never fall apart

Thank you very much!
116 years, 8 months & 24 days ago 2nd Nov 2008 18:19
 
Nice job...
116 years, 8 months & 24 days ago 2nd Nov 2008 14:53
 
Thank you!
116 years, 8 months & 25 days ago 1st Nov 2008 22:01
 
I love it!
116 years, 8 months & 25 days ago 1st Nov 2008 18:51
 
Thank you!I thought about being an author.
116 years, 8 months & 28 days ago 29th Oct 2008 17:53
 
you are really good at writeing poems
116 years, 8 months & 28 days ago 29th Oct 2008 17:49
 
Thanks for commenting.
116 years, 9 months & 4 days ago 22nd Oct 2008 17:43
 
Pretty good, but some of your word choice seems a little rushed and sophomoric.
116 years, 9 months & 4 days ago 22nd Oct 2008 00:12
 
Thank you.
116 years, 9 months & 5 days ago 21st Oct 2008 19:02
 
  1. MY MARAPET FRIENDS
    9th Sep 2008 19:10
    16 years, 10 months & 17 days ago
  2. Whats Love?
    29th Aug 2008 23:43
    16 years, 10 months & 27 days ago
  3. POEMS I WROTE
    11th Jul 2008 12:18
    17 years & 16 days ago
  4. Apart
    10th Jul 2008 00:41
    17 years & 17 days ago