I like to write...every so often, I come up with a situation, complete with names, ages, physical and emotional descriptions, etcetera. Feedback in the form of comments would be appreciated...
please post what number situation you are commenting on. I hope to have several on here, and would like separate feedback on each.
1. "Peace on another world"
This is one I play with every so often. It is set several years into the future...about twenty years before this ocurred, and again about five years before, creatures from another world came to attack. The majority of the world was wiped out, and what was left had to band together. At the moment, the entire population of the earth is in a single colony, a bit bigger than half of the United States. All children who were under ten years old when the second wave came were given a quick 'crash-course' in foreign languages, and now most children are bi- or tri-lingual. After hearing of a third wave coming, the colony sent some of the children in a small ship to find another planet...
'Marmies' is slang in this time for a pair of same-gender twins. Due to the attacks, there are only two same-gender twins in the colony-both go along on the ship.
Taila and Treta-are seven years old, Marmies. Both have long brown hair and an uncanny way of looking at a person, as if they are seeing all their secrets, because in fact-they are. Marmies have such talents as body inhabiting, soul reading, mind reading, etcetera. They are also Sensitive to creatures most don't notice. The male Marmies were the ones who warned of the second wave. Taila is usually kinder than her sister. The pair were volunteered for the trip by their grandma, who had cared for them following the death of both parents in the second wave. She had caught the radiation sickness and knew that this was their chance to get away.
Merlonter and Martinai-are eleven years old, male Marmies. The term Marmie was named after Martinai, the older by almost three minutes. Both have short, messy blond hair. They volunteered themselves, much to the annoyance of their single surviving relative, an older cousin. This could perhaps be because everyone gave money and gifts to the Marmies, as well as feared them somewhat.
Jalindor and Jarania-fourteen year old boy-girl twins. Both have dark, almost black hair. Jarania keeps her in a ponytail or braid, while Jalindor's is usually short and combed flat. They volunteered thems
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