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phantomsnightout
as you can tell from the title its about poems. check out khj11 and you can see three poems the first two are mine that i written for my girfriend 6 years ago on valentines. therefore i conclude that he is a thief and i am a poet at heart
if you want too read the poems i wriiten and khj11 stole scroll
down by the way they have been upgraded



coral glow,
down below.
i'll take you there,
for the love that we share.
loves everwhere.
down fleet street.
the place that we meet.
in the sky.
its everywhere,
face it,
you can't escape it.
so then i find,
in my mind.
theres a message of love,
brought by the sacred dove.


roses are red violets are blue,
everything i see reminds me of you.
i see a bike,
it reminds me of the days we used to play.
i see the see a romantic novel,
it reminds me of our first kiss.
oh yeah.
so what i'm trying to say,
is i wouldn't last another day.
without you
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Comments (26)
  • Hamster2000 0 Hamster2000Not bad. But, you gotta work on them. I don't thing the are terrible and I dont thing they are great. They are... good.
  • bluestar56 0 bluestar56I love it!! Keep going!
  • limtiedt2o 3 limtiedt2o4/10... u could work a little more
  • phantomsnightout 0 phantomsnightoutbluestar you have an excellent taste in poetry and i can't say that about limited or hamster
  • kittyme123 0 kittyme123You couldn't say that because Bluestar is the only one whos probably saying it to be over the top nice. I rate it a 6/10 In some places it doesn't flow just right, you're no expert that's for sure but still, you have talent. Work just a little harder and you could be great.
  • phantomsnightout 0 phantomsnightoutthanks kittyme oh by the way kittyme i am sorry about blaming you doubting you being nasty to you and critisizing you
  • kittyme123 0 kittyme123It's fine. I'm also sorry for being belligerent and condescending.
  • morgandanielle 0 morgandanielleThe first one is better than the second one.
  • 0 TheEnglishFittyloved it
  • phantomsnightout 0 phantomsnightoutthanks
  • edgington12 0 edgington12they are cool good job
  • phantomsnightout 0 phantomsnightoutthankyou
  • 0 cre101Cool poems!
  • phantomsnightout 0 phantomsnightoutyay
  • hallowinmad 0 hallowinmadthey cool poems i like tham
  • Josalie 0 JosalieAll of them are about love... nice. ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ I luv poetry too. It is all about feeling, and there is almost always a message behind it. Eather a cry for help, a shout of anger, or a song of love. There is many more too. So beautiful. *Sighs dreamily,but no to girlish*
  • phantomsnightout 0 phantomsnightoutthanks everyone
  • TigeAtHeart 0 TigeAtHeartSo spooks is in love, or was? Good, noting matters more than you're feelings
  • phantomsnightout 0 phantomsnightoutkk
  • hallowinmad 0 hallowinmadlolkira i love the 2
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