Sign Up
 
Log In
317 Players Online
04:19:01 MST
Sign Up
Log In
Pets Explore Games Forums Dress Up Games Clubs Trades Auctions News Battle Account Upgrades
Marapets is mobile friendly
Switch to Desktop Mode
Marapets is mobile friendly
Switch to Desktop Mode
[Imgur is not supported in the UK - Please use Mara.Pics]
[Imgur is not supported in the UK - Please use Mara.Pics] invisible.gif
Nichelle
  1. Barbecue's Missing Gourmets!(S-Z)
    22nd Sep 2019 09:04
    6 years, 9 months & 11 days ago
  2. Barbecue's Missing Gourmets!(M-R)
    22nd Sep 2019 08:52
    6 years, 9 months & 11 days ago
  3. Barbecue's Missing Gourmets!(G-L)
    22nd Sep 2019 08:39
    6 years, 9 months & 11 days ago
  4. Barbecue's Missing Gourmets!(#-F)
    22nd Sep 2019 08:28
    6 years, 9 months & 11 days ago
  5. Siggies
    1st Jun 2018 09:04
    8 years, 1 month & 2 days ago
  6. TY
    7th Sep 2009 10:22
    16 years, 9 months & 26 days ago
  7. Poems by me, please rate NO STEALING!
    15th Aug 2008 16:13
    17 years, 10 months & 18 days ago
Nichelle 25 Comments
Poems by me, please rate NO STEALING!
17 years, 10 months & 18 days ago
15th Aug 2008 16:13

We dance all night long
When the music stops you say "Play another song"
Then everyone leaves and the laughter is gone
You and I sit here its totally calm
As we sit you grab my palm
You look into my eyes as they glisten
And I sit there quietly as I listen
I love you you tell me
And its then and there,
I know
You and I are meant to
Be


We gaze at the night sky
We tell each other not one lie
Its me and you
You and I
For then you grab my hand and say
"I can not be with you, I can not stay"
The cracks my heart, straight in two,
But then I realize I can't be with you
I sigh and pull away from your grasp
I slip away from you at last



The time we share will always be treasured
My darling dear for now and forever
You will be loved I can honestly say
Day after day after day after day
You are my love
You are my joy
Even though you are a pixel
Even though your but a toy
You will be treasured with out a doubt
Though if I don't get you I will not pout


Ok, Will be adding more soonhappy.gif Thanks for reading! Please rate!!

Page of 3
‹ Prev
1
2
3
Next ›
Last ››
of 3
‹‹
1
2
3
›
››
luv2shop16
10/10 great job!!!!!!
Bronze Shield 117 years, 6 months & 1 day ago 31st Dec 2008 08:53
 
10/10 good job
Bronze Shield 117 years, 10 months & 12 days ago 21st Aug 2008 20:26
 
9/10 <333 9 because you pay very much attention to rhyming. Not every poem is made to rhyme. Some poems are beautiful as they are because of the sillible matching in the stanzas, and some poems are just better off not rhyming but then they'll sound better. You shouldn't care much for rhyming. Just as long as the poem is coming from your soul, it will always be a poem, and a beautiful one at that
Bronze Shield 117 years, 10 months & 12 days ago 21st Aug 2008 11:37
 
ooh, how pretty. I love that second one most, it has a good point to it.
Bronze Shield 117 years, 10 months & 12 days ago 21st Aug 2008 11:35
 
you also need some commas.
----
Poems are meant for breaking the rules. It is fine the way it is. 9.75/10 XD
Bronze Shield 117 years, 10 months & 12 days ago 21st Aug 2008 10:37
 
they are good. so i give it a nine and a half out of ten.
Bronze Shield 117 years, 10 months & 16 days ago 17th Aug 2008 16:18
 
Struggles-Well, I don't know xD I was just writing actually
Bronze Shield 117 years, 10 months & 16 days ago 17th Aug 2008 11:53
 
Wow, I didn't know it was about a pixel! That's really pretty <3 10/10
Bronze Shield 117 years, 10 months & 16 days ago 17th Aug 2008 08:59
 
10/10 i loved it!,i also write poetry and this is just awsome
Bronze Shield 117 years, 10 months & 18 days ago 15th Aug 2008 18:04
 
9/10 It was good.
Bronze Shield 117 years, 10 months & 18 days ago 15th Aug 2008 17:58
 
Page of 3
‹ Prev
1
2
3
Next ›
Last ››
of 3
‹‹
1
2
3
›
››
  1. Barbecue's Missing Gourmets!(S-Z)
    22nd Sep 2019 09:04
    6 years, 9 months & 11 days ago
  2. Barbecue's Missing Gourmets!(M-R)
    22nd Sep 2019 08:52
    6 years, 9 months & 11 days ago
  3. Barbecue's Missing Gourmets!(G-L)
    22nd Sep 2019 08:39
    6 years, 9 months & 11 days ago
  4. Barbecue's Missing Gourmets!(#-F)
    22nd Sep 2019 08:28
    6 years, 9 months & 11 days ago
  5. Siggies
    1st Jun 2018 09:04
    8 years, 1 month & 2 days ago
  6. TY
    7th Sep 2009 10:22
    16 years, 9 months & 26 days ago
  7. Poems by me, please rate NO STEALING!
    15th Aug 2008 16:13
    17 years, 10 months & 18 days ago


Return to
Jenoa
Clubs
Editorial
Forums
Friends
Mail
MaraTalk
Notice Board
Pages
Players Online
Referral System
Sewer Fairy
Spam Fairy

Return to
Jenoa
Switch to Desktop Mode
Enable Mobile Mode
Terms and Conditions
Account Protection
Link to Us
Contact Us
Privacy Policy