I also have a cat named Pantherclaw =o I don't rp him as much, mainly use him in my stories.
Just one thing that really bugged me though was that you didn't space after your punctuation which makes it a bit harder to read. You have some spelling mistakes, noting too major though, just an extra letter here and there.
I'm not sure if this is from the middle of something that you are/were writing or if it's the start of something, but if it's the start of the story of whatever, then I think that you need to be a lot more descriptive of the settings, characters etc..BUT if it's from the middle of a story or ..something and you've already provided your reader with enough information then it's fine. :]
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