"firestar!" " what grayswim?" " the twolegs put a coller on me GET IT OFF!!!!!!!!!" i screamed " grayswim you can't get it off!" i stared to cry " firestar help me get it off i don't want to be a kittypet" i weep
0SwiftCatThunderClanI can't read it. It is ILLITERATE, and very hard to understand. Grey, not Gray.
"Firestar!"
"What, Greyswim?"
"The twolegs put a collar on me, help me get it off!."
I (Who??) screamed, "Greyswim you can't get the collar off!" and started to cry.
"Firestar, help me get it off, I (Who?) don't want to be a kittypet!" I (Who??) weep.
This is proper.