My Daughter: Chapter 1
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13th Jan 2020 21:24
Okay, I'm working on this story, I posted it on Wattpad a while ago, but it is Low
on views, I'm starting to think they are all from me editing them, but here is the story, I'm just gonna copy and paste!
My Daughter Chapter 1: My Beloved
It was a horrible scenery, thousands of tears watered the grass, while on the ground lied two dead rose bouquets, it represented their daughter Christine Magwaune. Her arms crossed, one hand lie over the other, with her pale skin, and blank expression.
She was loved, very sweet and most teenagers from her school came to visit her before burial. "God bless her," they would say as the rest of the crowd were silent. It was 2 AM and people were getting started with their family reunion. It was a tradition, that whenever a family member died, one family member would host a reunion, or a get together since each of them lived far from each other.
They would toast to each other and try to have a great time over the passing of a loved one, and that was their way of moving on. Malkem Magwaune had gotten over so many deaths, but the death of his daughter stuck with him. 'The hospital never mentioned why,' he wondered 'why she died.' There was a special team, which examined dead bodies and gave their ideas of what might have happened. 98.8% of the people they guessed on seemed to have been true, and the doctors just hadn't seen them before.
The crew had five members, who knew a lot about different body meanings or happenings each. One might notice one thing, while the other notices another. Malkem hired them, they were pretty rude, and they charged $500 each because he was rich, and they knew he would pay them any amount they gave, but there were already bad reviews, so they went a little over the regular pricing.
They entered and almost immediately drowned in amaze. The walls were a tan color, with dark wood staircases, and red carpet rugs. Baby angel statues filled their home, and some were even secret areas where Christine liked to play Hide and Seek or hide her allowance. Her parents adored her, since she was their firstborn child, and they already had a miscarriage. Trina Magwaune wasn't allowed to have children anymore by the law, so they never had any more.
The hired team found nothing, she was completely empty, no signs of any struggle, no suicidal wounds, or suffocation, nothing, she was just, gone. It happened on her birthday, she was dressed beautifully, her best friend Mary and her twin brother Mike were there, along with many others. Mike had spilled his hot cocoa on her dress, and she went to go change into a suit, but she never came down. When her parents arrived to see if she had fallen asleep, she was in her bed, unconscious, once her mother touched her, she just died.
It was the worst scene of their lives, how had she died? What caused her death? They could only ask questions, and make guesses because there was no magical fairy to give Christine a chance to show them how she died, and who did it. "It was probably something she ate?" The team reassured him, but they all ate what she did, so that didn't help at all
Malkem went to the hospital the next day to visit the hospital about his daughter, they tried to tell him to leave, but he wouldn't. "I need to know if you notice anything wrong with my daughter's body, pictures are in the car right now. Just please, look and tell me if you see anything." He walked out to the car, as Malkem led him.
He checked, and still nothing. Malkem rushed into his car, as he drove, he tried to think of an expert who could know something. He checked the phone book that Christine begged them to buy when she was a little child. Again, he found nothing. That night, he couldn't go to sleep, thinking of who could have done, and how if nobody was in the room with her when she went to change.
He rushed to the police station, arriving in the building he waved a clipboard with a list of suspects, where they were, and other useful details, like their phone numbers, what they did for her birthday and other things like that.
The list was:
Mike: He had spilled the drink on her clothes, which sent her to go change.
Mary: She went to the bathroom a few seconds before the drink was spilled.
Trina Magwaune: She cooked most of the dinner.
Janetter Waboske: She was working on her period at the time in the upstairs bathroom.
Robert Waboske: He had been in the kitchen the whole time sneaking in the sweet dessert.
The rest were just there to have food, help Trina with the food, or talk until it was time to leave. When Christine was discovered dead, they all wanted to stay for support, but they all had work to do where they lived.